Saturday, March 17, 2012

My Life, My Soul Comments

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Today`s my life much differs from another,
I stay alone among the tens of friends,
I am an angel just for you, my brother,
If our fortune awful quests you sends.
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Kateryna Polishchuk
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Arild Ertsland 18 March 2012

Beautiful and captivating write dear Ekatrina.You write with such a honest touch to it.Nice rhyming flow to it..Loved it!

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Harindhar Reddy 18 March 2012

Fairly handsome poem by you kate yet again you have wrought a wonder with your poetry. What stylish way of expressing your loneliness. Yes though we stay among tens of friend we many be still feel lonely. I guess I know my pathway silent feature, To go ahead for me is fearful task. Yes life is all about wearing masks so too wear one as poetess did. A very good poem with in-depth meaning!

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Wahab Abdul 17 March 2012

your soul is the reality and your life is full of mask.....heart and soul say something different than the life and body want to listen......so you want to wear the mask.........................you excels in poetry here, my dear poetess, keep writing good poems and tell us the secrets of life, the real, the very true, not the apparent ones.

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