Wednesday, February 18, 2009

My Life Is A Curse Comments

Rating: 4.8

I wish someone could help me out of this struggles
Fill the emptiness with Love and Care
Make me feel i am important
Worthy and Proud.
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Von Klassique 11 November 2021

Life is a struggle. It never ends. Powerful write🔥

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Varsha M 15 December 2020

This is really a heartfelt poetry. Touching deep down my soul. You made me to think to write and to admire and learn from the pain just because I perceived it that way. Full score. Into my poem list.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 December 2020

If one does not have a stone in his body but a heart that feels, tears will come in his eyes after reading this poem. It's a masterpiece of poetry.

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Sarah Shahzad 06 December 2019

very beautiful and touching piece, please do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my site..

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Chinedu Dike 10 November 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry written from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Diane.

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Dev Anand 28 July 2018

Pain, pain, pain Huh i am in pain Hurting My heart is aching. My life is in Pain.....oh no no no, dont say all that..... life is a celebration...... dont wait for others to come and love you....... you begin to love. get away from your narrow mind and mentality may be it is induced into you through your religiosity....... get out, be bold and begin to love.. dev

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Dev Anand 09 September 2017

Fill the emptiness with Love and Care Make me feel i am important Worthy and Proud........life is a never a curse.. we have to make it great and joyous just as we can.......may God bless u to make ur life just a joy.. dev

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Saji G Praleyagiri 08 September 2017

Ms. Diane ur. imagination of life is a curse unless help poor.A pray & help for poor in ur poem is good; as I depict in my poem 'The Violinist' u may read. thank u

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Ernest Makuakua 17 February 2017

this is powerful Inspiring too Thanks for sharing

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Diane Montemayor 07 September 2017

Dear Sir Ernest, Thanks for the comment. Sincerely, diane

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Ernest Makuakua 17 February 2017

Sometimes in life we feel defeated and dont find love and happiness where we should and we keep wishing if only... Yet there is no space that God would not fill we just have to trust in him and let go and let God deal with it

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Jurgen Donlad 04 January 2017

Wish are just wish, dreams are dreams. You are more important when you are happy with life, Love makes you dream and make sweet wish but courage makes your dreams, wishes reality.

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Diane Montemayor 05 January 2017

Dear Sir Jurgen, That poem was for my bestfriend who stayed with me for 10 years, because she thinks nobody cares about her except me......Thank you.. Sincerely, 'diane

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Kathy Van Kurin 21 November 2016

Diane Montemayor, I am so sorry to hear of this time of hurt which brought forth this poem. Your life is seen by God and He is in it with you and understands. we wish for peace and prosperity but life is not so simple all the time. I am sure you are aware. Well young lady your writing is a friend to you for in it you process and learn. Keep writing and practicing your craft. God bless you. Kathy

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Diane Montemayor 05 January 2017

Dear Madam Kathy, That poem was for my long lost friend who stayed with me, who longs love and care from her family.. She is happy now actually... Thank you. Diance

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Kee Thampi 25 October 2016

I wish someone could help me out of this struggles Fill the emptiness with Love and Care Make me feel i am important Worthy and Proud.

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Diane Montemayor 05 January 2017

Dear Sir Kee, Thank you, , that was a poem dedicated to a friend of mine.... Sincerely, diane

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Wilma De Guzman 31 July 2016

I hope you are not in this situation at the moment or anymore! Just trust God for everything! He is the healer of our hearts!

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Diane Montemayor 05 January 2017

Dear Ma'am Wilma, This poem is for a friend who happens to be hmmmmmm..... Sincerely, diane

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Christopher Tye 04 July 2016

Sometimes we can only really appreciate life's pleasures fully after suffering pain and hardship. Good poem very thought provoking.

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Diane Montemayor 05 July 2016

Dear Sir, Thank you. Sincerely, Diane

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 June 2016

Pain, pain, pain Huh i am in pain Hurting My heart is aching. My life is in Pain...oh dont be like this.. do not think like that..... it is not good. it will lead you to depression. think of all the beautiful things in this world. think of all the poets who write and comment on your poems. they all like you very very much more than what you can imagine........ wait... love comes to conquer you..... God bless u. tony

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Diane Montemayor 24 June 2016

Dear Sir, Thank you. Respectfully, Diane

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Ghost Watcher Megee 16 December 2014

I wish to say im sorry of the pain you endured and I hope this hole shallow.

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Diane Montemayor 05 January 2017

Dear Sir Poet, That was an agony from my best friend who stayed with me for 10 years...who needs love and care..But she is now okay.. Sincerely, diane

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Yll L 18 April 2010

doing is more powerful than wishing if you start building your dreams then it will become reality....with your permission....

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Wish is just a wish Dreams are just dreams They are just an illusions And never become a reality........ happy wish and can really become true.... fine wordings with beautiful presentation....10 read mine, papa do u know, papa u too and all dreams not come true...comment

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Juneil Sechico 14 June 2009

full of emotion! very expressive! yes you are right dream is just a dream...wish is just a wish when you do nothing to realize it! this verse offended me 'Wish is just a wish Dreams are just dreams They are just an illusions And never become a reality.' I agree with Glenn

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