I wish someone could help me out of this struggles
Fill the emptiness with Love and Care
Make me feel i am important
Worthy and Proud.
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This is really a heartfelt poetry. Touching deep down my soul. You made me to think to write and to admire and learn from the pain just because I perceived it that way. Full score. Into my poem list.
If one does not have a stone in his body but a heart that feels, tears will come in his eyes after reading this poem. It's a masterpiece of poetry.
very beautiful and touching piece, please do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my site..
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry written from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Diane.
Pain, pain, pain Huh i am in pain Hurting My heart is aching. My life is in Pain.....oh no no no, dont say all that..... life is a celebration...... dont wait for others to come and love you....... you begin to love. get away from your narrow mind and mentality may be it is induced into you through your religiosity....... get out, be bold and begin to love.. dev
Fill the emptiness with Love and Care Make me feel i am important Worthy and Proud........life is a never a curse.. we have to make it great and joyous just as we can.......may God bless u to make ur life just a joy.. dev
Ms. Diane ur. imagination of life is a curse unless help poor.A pray & help for poor in ur poem is good; as I depict in my poem 'The Violinist' u may read. thank u
Sometimes in life we feel defeated and dont find love and happiness where we should and we keep wishing if only... Yet there is no space that God would not fill we just have to trust in him and let go and let God deal with it
Wish are just wish, dreams are dreams. You are more important when you are happy with life, Love makes you dream and make sweet wish but courage makes your dreams, wishes reality.
Dear Sir Jurgen, That poem was for my bestfriend who stayed with me for 10 years, because she thinks nobody cares about her except me......Thank you.. Sincerely, 'diane
Diane Montemayor, I am so sorry to hear of this time of hurt which brought forth this poem. Your life is seen by God and He is in it with you and understands. we wish for peace and prosperity but life is not so simple all the time. I am sure you are aware. Well young lady your writing is a friend to you for in it you process and learn. Keep writing and practicing your craft. God bless you. Kathy
Dear Madam Kathy, That poem was for my long lost friend who stayed with me, who longs love and care from her family.. She is happy now actually... Thank you. Diance
I wish someone could help me out of this struggles Fill the emptiness with Love and Care Make me feel i am important Worthy and Proud.
Dear Sir Kee, Thank you, , that was a poem dedicated to a friend of mine.... Sincerely, diane
I hope you are not in this situation at the moment or anymore! Just trust God for everything! He is the healer of our hearts!
Dear Ma'am Wilma, This poem is for a friend who happens to be hmmmmmm..... Sincerely, diane
Sometimes we can only really appreciate life's pleasures fully after suffering pain and hardship. Good poem very thought provoking.
Pain, pain, pain Huh i am in pain Hurting My heart is aching. My life is in Pain...oh dont be like this.. do not think like that..... it is not good. it will lead you to depression. think of all the beautiful things in this world. think of all the poets who write and comment on your poems. they all like you very very much more than what you can imagine........ wait... love comes to conquer you..... God bless u. tony
I wish to say im sorry of the pain you endured and I hope this hole shallow.
Dear Sir Poet, That was an agony from my best friend who stayed with me for 10 years...who needs love and care..But she is now okay.. Sincerely, diane
doing is more powerful than wishing if you start building your dreams then it will become reality....with your permission....
Wish is just a wish Dreams are just dreams They are just an illusions And never become a reality........ happy wish and can really become true.... fine wordings with beautiful presentation....10 read mine, papa do u know, papa u too and all dreams not come true...comment
full of emotion! very expressive! yes you are right dream is just a dream...wish is just a wish when you do nothing to realize it! this verse offended me 'Wish is just a wish Dreams are just dreams They are just an illusions And never become a reality.' I agree with Glenn
Life is a struggle. It never ends. Powerful write🔥