My life is a boat,
my existence is sitting on it,
it is floating on cosmic water...
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Going with the flow. Ignoring what otherwise resticts a majority of people from self satisfaction. Beautiful message.
Beautifully envisioned prayer requesting the boatman, may be the almighty, to steer the life boat comfortably towards it's destination. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
life is a floating boat ant the boatman is another person .......wow; something mystical feelings
A well authored poem. Simply fascinating....10+++