Sunday, May 31, 2020

My Life In The Virtual Comments

Rating: 4.4

I always live in the virtual

For each moment I live
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Bharati Nayak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 September 2022

Many useful and productive things happen in virtual mode.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 September 2022

Yes, something at virtual plane can't be perceived as real but many useful and productive things in virtual platform that's why we embrace digital age humanity.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 September 2020

A well authored piece. Truly marvelous....10++++++

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Glen Kappy 19 July 2020

bharati, thinking more about this poem it struck me that mine entitled " pristine" has similarities. over and over in my poetry i am drawn to explore consciousness and perception. -glen

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Glen Kappy 17 July 2020

hey, bharati! catching up on your latest postings. you identify well the nature of the real in the first two stanzas. you know, of course, that when you summon for me or any reader recognition, that too is real, though, one might say, of a different variety... i share your dream. it makes me think of my poem " imagine me." hoping you are well and thriving, glen

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Uche Nwanze 21 June 2020

A masterpiece, simply shows class and dexterity in the way you pen down the words. I admire your work, thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 June 2020

though thy virtual life is dreamy, it's virtuous life really there is no wickedness no unpeace riotous activities no unpleasant movement of mind no disharmonious rule and unkind that's virtuous life really

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Indira Renganathan 13 June 2020

Very much a delightful poem....true to reality...I don't feel anything wrong living in a virtual life...I totally agree with your view...indeed an interesting poem 10+++

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Bharati Nayak 13 June 2020

Thank you Madam Indira Renganathan for your lovely comment on my poem. I am so delighted to see you on my poem page.Delighted to see you safe and fine.

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We have tales introducing intelligent people who could understand the language of birds and animals. I am happy to see the poetess acquiring such a magical capability. As each moment slips off from our grip we cannot claim a present. Similarly when we reach point of future it will be a present and then slips off to the past...10

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Khairul Ahsan 07 June 2020

'I understand their language And they understand my language' - a precondition for peace. The poem is nice visualisation of peaceful coexistence. Poet Kostas Lagos has brought out the substance of the poem in just four words. Love and appreciate his comment.

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Bharati Nayak 13 June 2020

Thank you Khairul Ahsanji for your wonderful comment on my poem.Yes, understanding others is a precondition for peace.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 June 2020

The dream on virtual life is so intensively and vividly delineated by you where there is no violence. Here every one dances with joy.There is no killing of animals..Here there is no feeling of master and servant. There is perfect harmony in this land. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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The heaven that everybody builds is initially a virtual one. When your utopia materialises I would like to hire a portion of it for I love to live in a land where there is peace and love.......10

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Susan Williams 06 June 2020

May I live in this beautiful dream as well? This poem is absolutely gorgeous and inviting and surrounds me with a peace that today's reality does not. Thank you. 10+++++++++++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 June 2020

May your dream come true even if these be virtual We all live the moment see my moment also has passed me The world can only live the continuing moment, moment to moment all lapses into a TIME'S MEMORY hopefully with glee let this moment halt a while till poetess you read PPME

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Akhtar Jawad 03 June 2020

a beautiful dream of a nice poetess, be it so!

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2020

Joy is it when the right thing is done! ! ! Dancing with the truth; Overcoming the odds. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 01 June 2020

A vision of peace...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 May 2020

A beautiful poem that depicts leaflets of your life! Extremely well penned......10+++

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Bharati Nayak 01 June 2020

Thank you Dillip for your valuable comment.Much appreciated.

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