My Life In Colour Comments

Well conceived and nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. A beautiful work of art.

But thoughts of you, pretty as pink cause my heavy heart to sink That very moment I felt blue The very same day that I lost you well done, the colour has used as a metaphor successfly as we can see in this amazing stanza how blue expressing feeling of lost, excllent, thanks for sharing

Lovely poem. Dont be too regretful though. You done good growing old. Some never made it.