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It's a vision or it an illusion?
No it must be a vision but I need a transformation
Of a sections in a vision.
Illusion become a section of planation
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Other than the spelling bro, the most important thing is to be able read between the lines, the most significant thing is to be able to comprehend the theme, and by my side, all that was truely satisfied, the invinvible attitude derived from your proud emotions, will play a large amount towards, its nice theme bro. Well expressed reagardless of the grammar, we all have a room for improvement afterall....Write More mate, The_African_Son
There are some spelling mistakes and grammatical errors...not sure if you included them intentionally to express something? but over all a nice poem especially for someone in your position, first year uni. Keep the ambition and enthusiasm!
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7/21/2025 2:21:00 PM # 1.0.0
a brave attempt indeed...never give up!