Every day, there are things I say
Every night, there are dreams I play
Every dawn, there in silence I pray
Every dusk, there are fears I fray.
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really feeling great reading ur work.... class apart..... u rock
whether u think u can or u cannot, u r right.. ' only u can create ur fate wow...i liked dat very much..... their sticks r broken too dat too is grt.... so u fought back.... grt poem.... best wishes on ur next poem...
awesome poem reflects your high spirit and strong personaloity
Hello teenager! What an idea on which you have written this poem! We alone create our fate. Welldone.
Really good... and complete with a positive message... Aditi
I'm wounded I know, but their sticks are broken too very strong...n beautiful...
very nice poem, the idea is excellent and the craft is in high class, above a very nice poem i like it......
Life is woven with sorrow and delight. Your path will be smooth soon..Wonderful!
A fantastic flowing poem, really like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Self Destruction.
Your life indeed will be colorful, Successful...A fine read..keep it up... Congrats..