My Life And My Situation Comments

dear poet, read your verses. please see if you can add some beauty to these expressions by duly adding some images, similes, metaphorical additions and so on.. (purely my humble suggestion) the theme you have written is really sensible, and needs much attention. God bless. let me find some time to read you more. take care? . hope you doing fine. how is situation in Syria now. How is family? rgds. taj shah