</>I make a mistake often and I guess you do too,
I start believing me and my life are one instead of two.
And that I am an assortment of moments and nothing more,
What I am now is the result of what happened before.
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THATS VERY NICE DUDE I LOVE THE WAY YOUR POEM SPOKE TO ME :) PPLE LIKE YOU AN ME COULD MAKE A DIFFRENS IN LIFE MAN :)
Whao! This is simply amazing, beautifuly expressed and wel written
Whao! This simply amazing, .beautifuly expressed and wel written, .thumps up
Very nice i am surprised i am the first to comment about this poem it is very creative and emotional i wish you would continue to write more poems you are very good and best of luck
I like it. simple and deep!