Monday, December 4, 2006

My Life, A Tale Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ups and downs of the road
Are not enough
The crookedness of the path
Holds no mystery
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Namie Elisha
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Afzal Shauq 15 August 2009

It doesn’t matter how tedious, how crooked It doesn’t matter how painful, grievous My life in itself is a tale to tell. well done.. its really heartfelt type, , thoughful and sweet written poem about you tale of life.. the pain can be felt if read seriously.. you did a great job and its meaningful and very prefessionally done..make up of the poem is melodic..and intersting too...

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Sallie Howson 22 September 2007

i enjoyed that...keep writing

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Namie Elisha

Namie Elisha

Lagos, Nigeria
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