Thursday, May 11, 2017

My Life Comments

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I would give you my life, if only that I could
But, I can't, so I will give you a plant,
You can then water it and then raise it good
Pretend that it's me, then you will have a tree.
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Randy McClave
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Queeny Gona 11 May 2017

Kick it or punch it, unlike me it doesn't feel the same pain I need more than wishes and complaints, so just don't I could give your my life again, but I won't

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Randy Mcclave 12 May 2017

Thank you for reading my poem. :) Randy

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Diana Ballesteros 11 May 2017

its a beautiful poem. :)

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Randy Mcclave 12 May 2017

Thank you for reading, my poem, and thank you for your comment. :) Randy

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Diana Ballesteros 11 May 2017

very beautiful poem :)

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Ashland, Kentucky
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