Who has given life once
Has shown a ray of light
Resued form darkness of failure
Can engulf all pain
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fine creation really, I like it my dear daughter, go on. please read my poem ' Family members' and comment and vote for the contest if you so like.
He the almighty rescued form darkness of failure.go on writing -a very nice poem my child. Sushil Kumar Tripathy, Sonepur, Odisha, INDIA