My Life Comments
My life is now in shutters, my dream has been captured by the anonymous captain of my soul, who sails me straight to the north pole.my heart becomes cold, so i stand and shiver besides the river that carries my soul, with all these i tend to ask my self, why is this? where did i go wrong? Was it the devil in me? .but they tend to be rhetorical but i need answers, or are these the questions i should ask, is it the fault of my creator?
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I liked the theme with captain at the beginning. Rolls and flows well. Second half feels like a prayer. I liked this poem, read some of mine!
please keep writing John. You have many things to write about.
a great write about life. there are many questions to be asked. Life is a mystery within a mystery. I think.
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7/24/2025 5:56:45 PM # 1.0.0
Life is a journey with many obstacles as suggested by your poem. Great write.