My Life Comments

generally i like more punctuation, but this works for me. moves right along. you surprised me with dream at the end. you used dream earlier but i thought you were referring to a flesh and blood person who you had met. then at the end i got the feeling you were talking about the kind of dream one has while sleeping. but NOW i have just read your poet note and i'm not sure. hmmm? reality or fantasy? nice, in either case. thanks for sharing.