My Life Comments

nicely structured i was hoping for a positive end by my finish but yeh lol great read

I was hoping so much for a happy ending. No one wants to lose there life. I like this poem.

Reading this poem was a joyride..Splendid write

good job! good style and good idea.

Very clever poem, I much enjoyed reading it.thank you for the invite.

Dramatic ending and superb revelation of heart-felt expression!

Awesome! Just cannot express my words of appreciation.

really romantic.i think, the words above mirrors your life in culcutta...

Indranil, I'm big on free form; blank verse, end-stopped line, symbols, paradox...so I like your poem. I believe it is a work in progress. Keep writing.