Friday, April 27, 2012

My Life Comments

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I celebrate myself, and sing myself,
This soil & air are my soul mate
I, now twenty years old perfect health
My respiration and inspiration, the beating of my heart,
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Sweta Leena Panda
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Vassilis Comporozos 27 April 2012

very real and fresh. Go on, and, if you permit me to give some advice (I don't pretend to be a great poet!) , try to condense some meanings in shorter lines. It is very nice, though.

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