My Life Comments

Nice expressive verse,10+

Linda, it's too bad life doesn't come with an owners manual and a road map, instead we've got to figure it all out as we go along. Great poem... a lot of truth in it! Brian

If I knew then what I know now I might rethink the ride! How true...but thats life and thats how we gain.Great read! ! Love/Ray

A superbly delivered morning (here anyway) sermon Linda! As Alison says, funny, too. Well done.

Linda, Your first two lines say it all. Beautifully. And your last two remind us of the need to add a dash of humour every now and then. Lovely poem. Warmly Allie

Quite a sobering write, linda...one of Good Will & Friendship..Yuur message is one of Clarion vision as to weighing the overall past versus a small crack in the ice.... fine penning from a talent dear...'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''frank

Wow! A lovely poem on life.

The greatest truth presented in a very simple n charming manner.