My Life Comments

Good meaningful one.....nicely written....but wait have u used irregular for pendulum or life.........

such a wonderful way of describing the state of mind, untill the mind is enlightened about certain aspects of life.the pendulum that moves to and fro.but yes, it is a part of life.10++

That's life, the highs and the lows make the happy moments very important.

life like the waves...very true..lovely imagery with emotion in this poem...10

A very good contemplative poem full of insight.

we don't know in spite of everything...why, when, what of life!