Tuesday, June 23, 2009

My Life Comments

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My life perfect to some others,
but to me my life may be fun sometimes,
on other days it is sad,
loosing friends can be sad,
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Olive Bailey
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Rita Shay 23 June 2009

The poem started out good and it got confusing and out of hand after the fifth line. I think you have a lot of potential.

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