Thursday, December 4, 2008

My Life Comments

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Darkness in the room, as dark as night;
My life was darken, as dark as twilight.
Dark was the dream, darken than than my might.
Dark was the birth; darken than the midnight.
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seemakhera (Aanamika 805)
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Siddharth Singh 24 October 2009

There seems too much darkness in your life, but a day will come when bright light shall shine. And even death will have to surrender you as life would be waiting for you with open arms. Nicely written.

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Shyam Balaji 29 December 2008

good poem....think u must hv been so upset while writing this poem...dis poem cud be a good companion to anyone while being sad...but y so sad? ? ? ....nice peice...tc.

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Sarah Sisson 13 December 2008

That is so dark and sad....lovely wording

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Sarah Sisson 13 December 2008

That is so dark and sad....lovely wording

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