Saturday, November 8, 2008

My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two shots of hate from a mouth as loud as a gun,
like an assassin... who does it for fun.

Two deafening blows in a war that has just begun,
...
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Bleeding Heart
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Lisa Bray 14 November 2008

wow, i realy loved your poem i could see a pic in my head of what you where saying i could feel and here what was going around good job ill give u a 10++

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