My Life..? Comments

this poem is brilliant and perfect. Keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

Hello Sylvia, this is the first read of your work, which your forum post alerted me to. I think it is a good piece of poetry for a girl of your age, exploring all the insecurities that go with being a teenager and becoming a woman....we all feel lost like this at some time or another, often in youth, as it is then that we start to see the world as it is, in the cold light of adulthood approaching....life isn't fair in lots of ways but can also take a turn upwards quite suddenly...writing out your fear and worries is good and as you progress in your poetry and life, you will hone your own voice and skills as a poet....A good start, ignore the negative critters, because that is all they are! take good advice and always spell check your work. Keep writing. Waving at you Tai