Saturday, May 24, 2008

My Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

My hope is hope of mountains
And my fear fear of the wind
The wind may push things back a while
But the mountain remains unshook
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Alice Affi
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The first line had me dug right in. Great Poem!

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Marwa Nather 10 November 2008

Wow! Amazingly beautiful poem!

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JoAnn McGrath 24 May 2008

Wonderful write...love your use of metaphors to describe yourself and if you follow Him you won't be lost.: O)

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