Friday, August 8, 2008

My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Base pain, my loves companion.
Torn hearts, on which to dwell.
If not for love lamented,
I'd have no tale to tell.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Cristy Upshaw 08 June 2009

as well as it should be, if not among others. beautifully written, very heart felt.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

O it is an excellent poem. Love.

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Meggie Gultiano 01 February 2009

it is your life, and we only have to listen and not be judgmental..Go ahead and include this to your personal Hall of Fame..All of us did that, once in a while. this is a great and lovely write. Hugs from here, Meggie

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Andrew Blakemore 22 August 2008

This is a wonderful poem, it has a lovely flow, top marks my friend. Best wishes, Andrew

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 August 2008

Delighted. Attitude towards life is post-modern. Delighted.

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Kaspa Richards 20 August 2008

this is a brilliant poem u dont care if people dont like your poems but there is no bad attitude like how that view could come across u worked this poem very well, much admired.

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Tia Maria 20 August 2008

I like this one a lot Wolfey - this is just how it is for most of us. Life is life - no matter how dramatic or dull, that's just our story..... I shall add to my favorites :)

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Matt Johnston 17 August 2008

This is simple… not deep, but written as a matter of fact. Enjoyable.

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Callie Carroll 13 August 2008

'If not for love lamented, I'd have no tale to tell.' A poignant line, but, indeed, you do communicate both love gained and love lost very well.

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Wendy Bureau 12 August 2008

The trials and tribulations of life.. Greenwolfe this was very well written indeed.. The flow... the rhymes.. Exceptional.. Browse again.. oh I will.. Write on Wendy

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 August 2008

an amazing composition indeed! This dear poet has a power to capture poetic words and his verses are thoughtful.

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Ernestine Northover 08 August 2008

Liked enormously Wolfey, well expressed. Well up to your great standard. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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J Lee 08 August 2008

This is good or should i add a very i know not espcially the last two paragraph

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Kris Smith 08 August 2008

Another honest write Greenie, pleasure to read and life so complicated thats for sure, but it is worth living Chris thanks

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Emancipation Planz 08 August 2008

Wolfey, did I miss a special announcement? ? ? Boo hoo, must have been tired.. Base pain.. love the openers.... takes me straight back to the Leg End.. aroha xx

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Sadiqullah Khan 08 August 2008

yea definitly green your life has a lot to tell us and when you pen it down, , , thanx for sharing

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