Base pain, my loves companion.
Torn hearts, on which to dwell.
If not for love lamented,
I'd have no tale to tell.
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it is your life, and we only have to listen and not be judgmental..Go ahead and include this to your personal Hall of Fame..All of us did that, once in a while. this is a great and lovely write. Hugs from here, Meggie
This is a wonderful poem, it has a lovely flow, top marks my friend. Best wishes, Andrew
Delighted. Attitude towards life is post-modern. Delighted.
this is a brilliant poem u dont care if people dont like your poems but there is no bad attitude like how that view could come across u worked this poem very well, much admired.
I like this one a lot Wolfey - this is just how it is for most of us. Life is life - no matter how dramatic or dull, that's just our story..... I shall add to my favorites :)
This is simple… not deep, but written as a matter of fact. Enjoyable.
'If not for love lamented, I'd have no tale to tell.' A poignant line, but, indeed, you do communicate both love gained and love lost very well.
The trials and tribulations of life.. Greenwolfe this was very well written indeed.. The flow... the rhymes.. Exceptional.. Browse again.. oh I will.. Write on Wendy
an amazing composition indeed! This dear poet has a power to capture poetic words and his verses are thoughtful.
Liked enormously Wolfey, well expressed. Well up to your great standard. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
This is good or should i add a very i know not espcially the last two paragraph
Another honest write Greenie, pleasure to read and life so complicated thats for sure, but it is worth living Chris thanks
Wolfey, did I miss a special announcement? ? ? Boo hoo, must have been tired.. Base pain.. love the openers.... takes me straight back to the Leg End.. aroha xx
yea definitly green your life has a lot to tell us and when you pen it down, , , thanx for sharing
as well as it should be, if not among others. beautifully written, very heart felt.