My Life Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

My Life

Rating: 5.0


Base pain, my loves companion.
Torn hearts, on which to dwell.
If not for love lamented,
I'd have no tale to tell.

A search for life's contentment.
Exploring grief and joy.
The wonders of God's nature.
The time I was a boy.

I'll write them all once over,
Such things as may be said.
And hope they'll be as joyful,
As anything you've read.

But if you find them boring,
Or not your cup of tea.
Remember it's my story,
However it would be.

So take some time to linger.
A moment of each day.
It's just for your enjoyment,
I wrote my life this way.


Because this is a special poem which reflects my life and my
poetry it has earned a special place in my own Hall Of Fame.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kaspa Richards 20 August 2008

this is a brilliant poem u dont care if people dont like your poems but there is no bad attitude like how that view could come across u worked this poem very well, much admired.

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Tia Maria 20 August 2008

I like this one a lot Wolfey - this is just how it is for most of us. Life is life - no matter how dramatic or dull, that's just our story..... I shall add to my favorites :)

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Matt Johnston 17 August 2008

This is simple… not deep, but written as a matter of fact. Enjoyable.

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Callie Carroll 13 August 2008

'If not for love lamented, I'd have no tale to tell.' A poignant line, but, indeed, you do communicate both love gained and love lost very well.

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Wendy Bureau 12 August 2008

The trials and tribulations of life.. Greenwolfe this was very well written indeed.. The flow... the rhymes.. Exceptional.. Browse again.. oh I will.. Write on Wendy

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Cristy Upshaw 08 June 2009

as well as it should be, if not among others. beautifully written, very heart felt.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

O it is an excellent poem. Love.

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Meggie Gultiano 01 February 2009

it is your life, and we only have to listen and not be judgmental..Go ahead and include this to your personal Hall of Fame..All of us did that, once in a while. this is a great and lovely write. Hugs from here, Meggie

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Andrew Blakemore 22 August 2008

This is a wonderful poem, it has a lovely flow, top marks my friend. Best wishes, Andrew

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 August 2008

Delighted. Attitude towards life is post-modern. Delighted.

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