My Lies Comments

a poem with great insight...feeling comfortable and safe amidst all choas is like being in god's lap

nobody...even you can't decide...dreams come floating by themselves irrespective of our states of mind... just like this one you write about! you lie about! good write, Min...insightful...10

Wowwowowowow, , , I don't know this poem is so great, , , Love it much, , , but you have a dream now, don't you? ? (^_^) v Fighting...! ! ! Regards, Naru Kaede,

This is a great poem. So much depth this poem has added with it.

Ammmmmazing flow here! Matured composition! ...10++

only you can decide to reach that dream by your determination... thoughts provoking..nice write....A10 Read my poem ' Determination ' and you will know what is all about.... Ency Bearis