My Less Sober State Comments

Well written poem, to know the change has to come from within is half way to the needed change. A 10!

This is excellent my friend. I would revise the line" to a live half lived" I think that is what you meant was tto a life half lived. This is transparent poem that touches the topic of alcoholism and the outlook on life. A need for change cries out in the poem! A 10!