Saturday, August 16, 2008

My Lemon Tears Comments

Rating: 3.0

Sarrow and sadness taste like lemons,
So when i cry myself to sleep every night my tears are lemon,
I cry and cry,
Cant stop thinking of my grandpa,
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Samantha Guinen
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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2011

time comes when u forget the lemony chimes....emotions well depicted..

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James Timothy Jarrett 16 August 2008

Samantha, That is a beautiful poem full of of emotion and love that the readers can feel. Very well written. I give it a 10

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Nicolas Del Homme 16 August 2008

Its weird 2 me... How you could have such strong feelings someone you never met before...

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No One 16 August 2008

Beautiful...Very touching.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 16 August 2008

touching poem, thanks for sharing

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