My Last Words Comments

This is a very moving poem. I really like it a lot. Your wife is really a lucky one. Fantastic, Lawrence. I just hope that your real last words are not coming to soon. I want to enjoy for poetry nad wisdom for many years to come.

It is nice romantic write Lawrence_Unwritten Soul

This poem was composed and dedicated to my wife, Catherine Chiew Ngan as a will message to her when I am not around. In this touching poem, I expressed my most inner thoughts and gratitude about my heartfelt love to her and take care and love of me for life. So I want to let her know that by writing a poem for her and left a beautiful messages about my departure from this world to hope that she will understand my feeling and last words. I hope our poet members can do the same if they are interested to do so. Thank you very much to all the poets members who read and comments on my poems. This Poem Reflection notes by: Lawrence Hiung

A very beautiful poem. A great write.

this poem is soo good and romantic nice write... Top marks... Aditi