My Last Wish Comments

What a wish. What a heart.

What a heart! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Bold interspections, Kranthi..................................

in GODS house you will stay, when they come to take you away and yet! you still had time to pray. they can take your body, but not your soul that is something that only GOD holds. this is a beautiful write. a double ten.

Haha love your flow beautiful great work, , Mayb the ending of this poem should be...I will always love well mayb haha 10sssss

The last wish, the beginning of a new life. They can cut the head but can not cut the words.

There is eternal life in the kingdom of GOD

Oh God forgive them for they dont know what they are doing.............Beautiful last wish....beautiful write.......10+++.......

Mystic creation of your black poetry, Kind of odd to your last wish but very well painted the image in my mind....