My Last Wish Comments

With hopes I came in this unfavorable world, With hopes shall go to a new probable world. Dear Akhtar Sahab, please do continue to dance on the beats of eloquent words and beautiful verses.....10

I hope you keep coming from behind the curtain again and keep composing new tunes. You create a new bond with your readers every time you create a new song to spread your goodwill.

What a wonderful and touching poem. Physical attributes may weaken but as long as the mind is still capable of doing magnificent things, one can be as powerful as a strong man. A poem of great depth beautifully written. Liked the closure lines. It is my ardent hope too that we will be able to dwell in a wonderful and caring world.

Sir ja ji before you go do read my latest just posted BORROWED TIME YOUR POEM WILL NOT BE FORGOTTEN MAKE AS MANY MORE WISHES AS YOU MAY WHILE TIME IS THERE STILL ALLAH'S WILL

A nice fantasy, a lovely poem, beautiful.