Saturday, December 16, 2017

My Last Wish Comments

Rating: 4.5

When I die, cut out my heart
And feed it to lions
So that my poor body
May know of greatness and might
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Brian Smith
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Strabo Odari 19 December 2017

A poem encouraging us to live life the best we can. For when we die who will live for us?

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Brian K. S. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2017

An excellent poem Marvelously inscribed

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Londis Carpenter 16 December 2017

You definitely have something going here, Brian. This was an enjoyable read, very coherant.

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