My Last Prayer Comments

as a poetic thought it's very good, as an eternal journey it's wonderful and as a blissful meeting it's great too, but it can be your prayer for the last phase of life, certainly not the last prayer...live long Ms. Burns, and keep writing short and beautiful poems of heart.! ! !

the moment is completeness of life with successful achieve of glory of life.

the moment is completeness of life with successful achieve of glory of life.

Wow..Wonderful poem....A journey to meet your loved ones in heaven...The beautiful journey to heaven.. Loved reading it twice..

A really wonderful poem, really like this. It reminds me of one of my last poems I wrote before I had many years away from writing. It's called, Child In Your Arms. It's in my poems, you may like it. I wrote it for my sister when her baby sadly died.

Something we all wish for - who knows, maybe we shall meet our lost loved ones again. A beautiful poem with a great sentiment.

A beautiful write about a journey to meet your loved ones in heaven!

What a glorious meeting it will be! A journey to wait for. Beautifully expressed. Thank you.

A beautiful moment visualized, when you will be reunited with your dear ones on the great Silver shore! !