My Last Lover Comments

An excellent and one of a kind write. Thought provoking and powerful. Death is not always welcome. Yet, it will always come in God's own time. Beautifully crafted by a brilliant mind.

Kesad, This is a superb penning, I love the subdued elegance in which you describe this dark lady, welcome by some but not all. Big 10+++

splendid piece of art.....i loved the unique way in which u have potrayed it (death) as your lover which i saw thru my eyes as a guest..... very creative piece sir...

Never I knew your ardent love Inconspicuous you remained Rachel Ann Butler

Wonderful Kesav, what a way to put that dark lady in her place. Cheers to you my friend. To life and love. Thank you for sharing with us :)

let her wait! I drink to that!

Well resist that! ! Ice cold... inconspicuous..and unaroused.. My Gosh this was absolutely GREAT! .. Now how 'bout a martini? ? lol I love this one Kesav.. my 10 Wendy

very nice poem......shows how much you feel for this lady love :))

very nice poem it is full of emotions.i like it a lot.

You seem to be deeply involved in the depth and flow of the words to finish all by one single breath....I wish you 'Long live my dear friend'

ohhh how sweet...........this poem made me to think about the hidden feelings n ur write.......the line ...'you, lady of divine dark love.......'....passionate and adorable way in describin ur girl.........can be said a blessed line fr sure.......loved te way yu penned t.......sebastine 10+++ fr sure...

hate thee not, lady gloom faced! Now go, I’ll woo you one day glad Let me finish my life’s drinks all, Wait till their intoxication lasts... bravo..... what a bravery.....rather friendly to the conqueror.. it's too intoxicating too dear kesavji, a good peom indeed. rgrds/salu

wow! ! lovely pice Kesavji...

Beautiful words here...thank you for sharing it

'await' also is noun...now obsolete...poetry is different from prose, Shanmugam...'on await' was alright...now relpaced by 'on the wait'...what harm is there!

nicely written. These many years on await; wait may replace await. await is not a noun

o my gosh.....dont wish for her...even if she comes, hpe she will not win...you should always be here coz there are visitors expecting for ur good wrks.. dont fall in her charm, ..dont stay with her....let her wait.. ..ths s a good piece kesav..i like ths one, , , but, , , owwwwwwww.........her touch is as cold as ice....am somewhat scared....nakakatakot naman....huhuhuuhuhu...

dark poem...eerie...heh...but...a good one it is! ....the way you described her dark looks and cold touch....sending chills down my spine! Nia

lady doom or shall we call her lady death? lovely way of expressing!

THERE IS THIS CERTAIN SENSE OF DARKNESS I SENSED IN THIS POEM... GOOD USAGE OF METAPHORS LIKE 'LADY OF DOOM' ETC...