Friday, August 8, 2008

My Last Love- The Boat Of My Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ride royally the waters
Oh! boat of my soul.
Let there be gentle wind with me
a star or two for company.
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jyoti saxena
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rago rago 26 October 2009

blend of conscious innerthought...and exchanging true fronts..........in reality how we live? ...........excellent work..............

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 November 2008

A highly intense love............the rockin boat of love.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 October 2008

Very nice; love bloomed with cute emotion. 10 for it.

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Reetessh Sabrr 26 August 2008

it takes me to the inner self where love hides and surfaces my last love again

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Sathyanarayana M V S 09 August 2008

You could make the images play before my eyes. Soooooo goooooood sathya narayana

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Young Insane 09 August 2008

aweeeeeeeeesome to me......

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A marvelous piece. This is the ultimate desire of every man/woman. U have expressed in a very lucid manner. Go ahead Jyoti. A good time ahead of u. I am too nicknamed as Jyoti. By the way what u do? ur husband & children? u do job or housewife? Regards - Pradeep (Jyoti)

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