Thursday, November 3, 2016

My Last Learning Comments

Rating: 4.8

I do not know my first learning,
I have heard it was a cry,
that brought smiles on many waiting lips,
my cry confirmed I have started breathing.
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Rajnish Manga 29 March 2017

What a fantastic poem indeed. This shows the sportsman spirit of the poet in the final stages in the game of life. A sense of satisfaction for a life lived meaningfully. Thanks.

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Valsa George 10 November 2016

If one can die with a smile, he is the most blessed man......! Succinct and beautiful!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2016

Birth and death both are true sequences in life. A child cries and learns the art of living in this Earth and life moves on. Learning the art of death with smile is interesting. Many fear to death but while know truth of life they do not attach to it very often and remain fearless and live and die with smile. A powerful poem this is definitely.10

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Nosheen Irfan 04 November 2016

So beautiful n poignant. Very well-conceived write. Great depth. One of my favorites by you sir. A super 10

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Kelly Kurt 03 November 2016

May we all die with smiles on our faces.

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Bharati Nayak 03 November 2016

Wow- - So poignant, yet so beautiful ! ! Life and death are part and parcel of life.The way you contrast birth and death.smile and tear, just holds my breath!

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