Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Saturday, February 4, 2023

My Last Known Address Was The Highway Comments

Rating: 5.0

My last known address was the highway.
I've travelled each and every byway.
I never will be home,
for I was made to roam.
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Kim Barney
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Belle Wassermeister 16 February 2023

This is such fun. I love the ease with which you come up with these limericks. Wes Vogler would be pleased.

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I made an enjoyable revisit to this magnificent ode to The Traveler.

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Rob Lamberton 15 February 2023

I want to learn to tell stories better. Perhaps I should try more limericks.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 February 2023

Inspired by LeeAnn Azzopardi, results in an amazing fiction. Bit hilarious, but a very pleasant read, Kim! Top Marks!

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Kim Barney 19 April 2023

Thank you, Sylvia. I appreciate the comment.

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Made a revisit today. Enjoyed this marvel once again.congratulations! This poem ranks #89 in the Best Poems of Members today. Deserves to be ranked better.

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Kim Barney 19 April 2023

Thanks so much, Unni ji.

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M.J. Lemon 12 February 2023

Who wouldn't want such a lifestyle? The problem may be failing to reach out and take it. Fantastic verse, Kim.

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Kim Barney 13 February 2023

M.J., thank you so much for commenting.

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Rebecca Navarre 10 February 2023

Beautifully and Brilliantly expressed! .. Each has to follow their heart! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kim Barney 13 February 2023

Thanks very much, Rebecca.

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Kim Barney 08 February 2023

Why does it take PH so long to show comments? I responded yesterday to EVERBODY who had commented on this poem, but I can't see ANY of my responses yet!

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I had made a comment on this poem long back. But, where has it disappeared?

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Smoky Hoss 04 February 2023

Me to pardner! I absolutely love this one! Bravo times infinity!

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Kim Barney 07 February 2023

Thanks for commenting, my friend. Yes, I believe I have heard that you like to roam a little bit.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 February 2023

Thank you Kim I know you meant well Bravo!

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Kim Barney 07 February 2023

Dear LeeAnn, thank you for commenting. This is not the first time that you have inspired me.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 04 February 2023

Thanks, LeeAnn, for giving Kim this idea!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 04 February 2023

I love your limerick, by the way, and hereby bestow five stars!

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Kim Barney 07 February 2023

Thanks, Ron. I appreciate the comment and the vote.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 04 February 2023

My last known address was the river. Thinking back, it gives me a quiver. I went there to fish, but fell in with a splish, and now all I do is just shiver.

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Smoky Hoss 04 February 2023

You might want to consider a move to the desert!

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Kim Barney 07 February 2023

You should post that on your own page as a new poem. Oh, wait --- you already did, with a few minor changes.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 February 2023

There you go again, dear Ron, but it's a fascinating poem you instantly wrote here.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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