My Last Goodbye Comments

A good start with a nice poem, Bhavya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! really really amazing.. the way it started off and the way it ended.. Beautiful..

A very poignant verse with beautiful patterns of conscious pain through a flow of lyrical perfection.

What can i say....love is like that....it gives us both, lifetime worth of happy memories, lifetime worth of unbearable pain.....Try to choose the happiness over the pain even though the pain can never be disowned...

My aching heart if you could see, My painful gaze if you could meet, My selfless love if you could feel; You would know this was no dream............ dream desiccates in rune of reality as grin by the green vociferates wilting cornfield when never sways by breeze love seems to bewilder by ruse of falling.wonderful write yet ingenious by imagery, and poignant by bidding farewell, most emotive write and evocative too,10+++, thanks for sharing

how parting from your loved one aches... the best part of this poem is that it speaks of both the individuals heart.. the one leaving, who though never valued the dear one but still would feel a void in his life because of his lovers absence and simultaneously pours out the inconsolable pain of the other individual... truly like it... nice one there! !

Bidding the last good bye is one of the most difficult to do...u have very well expressed the emotions and pain...Brilliant...clap clap clap for you

wow.......i felt every word in this poem. it was really awsome