My Last Breath Ii Comments

The 'breath' of poetry will not be stilled... I ponder that even unto death, some sort of it remains, taken into the dark as a small light to join the light of all. Write on, ever write onward.

Lovely poem, LeeAnn! Glad you conquered your writer's block.

Pure excellence! Inertian meets determination...This goes to myfavourites.

Amazing thoughts and feelings. The beauty of it is you wrote the poem....Wow LeeAnn.......10

Very nice approach, LeeAnn! Beautifully penned one...

Beautiful expression......like it...thank u, dear poetess...

That's amazing, LeeAnn! Even with writer's block, you're still able to write a good poem! Awesome!

If the will is in you then sleep can wait

An alarming expression from LeeAnn. " Maybe/I should stop. // But I can't / I'll stop when I have / My last breath"… A tad painful…

But rest and relaxation are necessary to keep fit. Relax and write. Beautiful poem.