My Last Breath Comments
I travel deep within myself, not sure of what I’ll find,
Walking through the tortured maze in the depth of my mind.
There’s bits and pieces everywhere, nothing here makes sense,
Strangled by my own emotion, I have no defence.
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Your poem beautifully written with lots of imagery. Very dark and lonely. I can visualize the prison that your in. I really like it. thank you very much for sharing. -Cleo
Very good. Very good rhyming. Thanks for sharing. -Brie
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9/4/2025 6:08:11 AM # 1.0.0
a beautiful piece of work and so well worded.