My Last Breath Comments

Just as your poisionous presence Threatened to do away with me Your grip suddenly released and I was set free That's my favorie line...cuz I lived it, lol. But really, I like ths one. An intense reflection on the past. Also nice how it ends. Almost means they didn't win. *BOO-YAH! ! *

This is gorgeous! I love the passionate but bitter reflection. Funny how often those two feelings mix. Hands down favourite line: But never the less The traces of you and marks you left Still remain all over me Did you take that line from some poem I haven't written yet-? :) Seriously, I love it!