Monday, August 3, 2009

My Last Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

This poem was written by my father Peter Traykoski one week before he died from pancreatic cancer on 17 April 2001


The leaves on the trees have changed color
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Milica Franchi De Luri
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Nalathai Vongjalorn 12 October 2009

The poem is very well written but a sad =( but it really deserves a 10+

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Ritty Patnaik 15 August 2009

dear millica.......it is a beautiful poem written by your dad, a sad one though.the feelings are so true, because, once i was close to death, and felt the same pangs....of leaving, except that with gods grace i survived.as we grow older we have to face the death of parents, and the memory remains, fresh like morning dew, in our minds.your dad has put his soul into this last poem of his.these little things becomes treasures for us.thanks for your comments, and sharing.best wishes.....ritty

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Laurie Hill 04 August 2009

a very touching write....

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Shagun Khera 03 August 2009

beautiful poem..really beautiful

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Thats really a good poem, we all die a thousand times, but still hang on to life which is our instinct.

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