Monday, August 31, 2020

My Lady Smiles Comments

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My lady's frown is like a day in June
which should of all the year be full of light
but all is shadowless and dim at noon
for grey skies dispossess its natural right.
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Roy Ballard
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Chinedu Dike 10 September 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings in verse with rhythmic splendour. A beautiful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Soran M. H 31 August 2020

but all is shadowless and dim at noon for grey skies dispossess its natural right. Then through the leaden cloud a shaft of gold

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Soran M. H 31 August 2020

well done it is full of poetic imagery, with strong language and new metaphors 10++

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