My lady's frown is like a day in June
which should of all the year be full of light
but all is shadowless and dim at noon
for grey skies dispossess its natural right.
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but all is shadowless and dim at noon for grey skies dispossess its natural right. Then through the leaden cloud a shaft of gold
well done it is full of poetic imagery, with strong language and new metaphors 10++
Well expressed thoughts and feelings in verse with rhythmic splendour. A beautiful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.