My Knight.... My Soulmate Comments

Hi Mistyeyed - This is love plaintive poem - a real cri de coeur. I gve it ten for structure and content. V 1 Waiting eternally - I'm afraid that sometimes us Knights can be a bit elusive! V 2 'I'm dying slowly' - that seems so so sad a lovely lady like you and no one to answer your call. V 3 Pretensions in love are very hard to bear but us TRUE KNIGHTS are always loyal and never pretentious. V 4 OK time is running out but I will be your Soul Mate and your Knight so your long wait is over. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X .

A nice poem stemming from the heart. A smooth call of help to your soulmate. Good write. Keep it up.