Wednesday, September 28, 2011

My Knight Comments

Rating: 5.0

People say knights have long died away,
But I know of one who is still here today,
At birth he was blessed with a silver tongue,
To enchant those he loves with words he has spun.
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Pari Dharawat 13 November 2011

BEAUTIFUL.... pleasure reading it... keep writing :)

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Ace Of Black Hearts 30 September 2011

This poem, reminds me of a poem I wrote called missing you still my dear friend. This is not that poem. Sometimes what we love the most will never see the light. Not in a way most people understand. A occasional midnight cry that is only heard through words. A plea for help and understanding. A calm steady hand in need of a little bit of mending. That angel still whispers to me on a scarce night. One where the wind blows a certain way. As prayer for a better day. With the stars glistening under the twilight. And the flames burning bright. I don't need her. When when they dim and the fire fissile out. When the darkness engulfs my own since being. She is my angel and she is always their. In your poem you describe things that I completely understand. I've been on the opposite end. Thank you for writing this poem.

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Crimson Love 30 September 2011

This poem is so so Beautiful! happy yet sad at the same time, The flow of this poem was magnificent! 10+++++++++

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