Monday, June 29, 2009

My Kitchen Comments

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I learned how to sweep my kitchen
As a mother cleans her new born

I learned how to wipe the cups with care
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Rajeswari A V
sugar sunset
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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 30 June 2009

Very creative composition. Your have immortalised the mundane Kitchen with your beautiful verse. Congratulations.

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Ted M 29 June 2009

Very nicely expressed. you are quite creative expressing very simple things in a poetic way. Just a thought; if i may say so; avoiding repetition of I learned could make your writing very affective and sound still better.

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Rajeswari A V

Rajeswari A V

Kerala
Rajeswari A V
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Kerala
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