that night i threw my keys
into the lake
thinking i found a home.
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I, too, threw my keys in a lake a while back... perhaps that's why this resonates so profoundly. I adore how you presented this - it whispers to me in a language I understand. It's subtle and yet somehow... incredibly loud at the same time. Beautiful, poet. ~Christine
What can I say? Your poetry speaks to me, with eloquence. You’ve captured something here, pride for one… a moment in time, and it is good.