Saturday, July 14, 2007

My Key Comments

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I had closed the door upon my heart
And wouldn't let anyone in,
I had trusted and loved only to be hurt
But, that would never happen again
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David Musyoka
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Nakiea Newman 17 May 2023

I loved the first time I read it in 2000! I was a teenager and can remember wanting to write the author and ask her for her autograph! LOL

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Manuel Odeny 05 January 2010

I love these lines: 'Then you came into my life And made me change my mind, Just when I thought that tiny key was impossible to find' Great display.

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Nakiea Newman 17 May 2023

Yes! The original author did an amazing job!

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Peter Gumbo 08 August 2007

I love the buid up and the flow in this poem.Keep up the good work

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Raveendran . 14 July 2007

A good attempt.Newly, differently said

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