Friday, August 24, 2012

My Jove Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are my god, as you don't have emotions,
You are rather cold.
And I, your worshipper, die, cry, to be in your blissfull shadow.
Please, be with me and make it history.
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Ramesh Rai 24 August 2012

My frnd. a great write. A person without emotion and feeling can never create poem. you are at tender age and enough time to create more and more poems. never stop writing. keep it up then one day you will be able to realise what poetry is? In my opinion, it is above all. top marks.

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Leslie Philibert 24 August 2012

Good work, like this, worshipper might be the better spelling.

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