Looking back at those younger years of my life '
'Twas not a happy one...
For I have to struggle with life to go on living..
Troubles and stripes were always there ready to pull me down.
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Mam as you said that you are a fighter, it seems. And the poem has a fighting spirit how you overcame over struggles. Inspiring! Rhythm! Melodious flow through cadances, cesura. I loved reading it.
Hi Ging... This is a poem from a heart, many can relate to this journey, its so real. Thanks for sharing a positive life experience +10
Hi Ging, A beautiful poem exuding positive energy. A song of immense resilience, from a person who could relegate the past to the past and could live a life in the present and have the courage to dream of the future; who could build a life of her own. Enjoyed reading.100
I believe I know exactly what you are saying better to succeed through trails than a spoon with silver lining thanks ging
To receive am answer, ask at Abel..... (II Samuel 20: 18) . This is in line with Jerimiah 6: 16. The ancient path is with the works of the truth (based on the Laws) . As such, the past is always with us; however, there is hope ahead. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
thank you Edward.In life there is always ups and down Sometimes we lost hope but when we realized it's only a trials..a test on how strong we are..and now we gathered already all the lessons in life.
An painful honest account of you journey so far, well written!
picked up brilliant stones of knowledge along with me. And survived all the trials along the way. the story of a wonderful journey and your determination to go the heights. a wonderful poem conveying courage and audacity to face life as it comes. thank you. tony
very apt poem for most people. People who have faith in Him, belief in prayers will alwayys have courage and strength to move on. Rewards always wait after the crossroad. Self pity and blaming others for our miseries will only bring us down. Inspirational!
Unlike many, you had an unhappy childhood! But you didn't languish in despair! The fighting spirit in you enabled you to slowly emerge from the dark past! Now with great will power and perseverance, you are climbing the ladder of success. May you continue to soar to greater heights! Enjoyed your poem!
congratulations on your success, and good luck in your continuing journey. :) bri
Life journey experiences ups and downs every now and then. One has to endure it to come out of it when low and be thankful to HIM when on up swing........I picked up brilliant stones of knowledge along with me. And survived all the trials along the way......I get up wipe my tears. I need to be strong to pursue my dream....yes that has to be the spirit...A meaningful poem with inherent message too. Rated 8
Life journey experiences ups and downs every now and then. One has to endure it to come out of it when low and be thankful to HIM when on up swing........I picked up brilliant stones of knowledge along with me. And survived all the trials along the way......I get up wipe my tears. I need to be strong to pursue my dream....yes that has to be the spirit...A meaningful poem with inherent message too. Rated 8
well a diamond sparkles only after it is chiseled at the right angles and corners.., ...all the strife of our life, its gods way of polishing us at right paths so that our soul shines out with our judgement and choices....
Looking back that younger years where I stand on the cross road again. Beautifully penned horrible things of life in poem composed in meaningful way. Nice job.
The great and terrible thing about life, today misery tomorrow the entire world is in love and we wondered, how could anything bother me. With a mustard seed not even Mt. Fuji can stand firm. And Mt. Fuji, is pretty awesome btw! Great write!
A life poem which has passed in such experiences of happiness and also sorrows a good poem.
It's been years since my last communication with Ging. She adored me OF COURSE, but tried to lure me from home to spend tourist-bucks in her homeland. ;)))